An almost empty vessel
food so scanty
four awaiting supper
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the diamond ring
the jewellery shop
the anti theft alarm
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the tiring day
a cozy bed
his warm hug
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The sumptuous meal
a hefty bill
bad stomach upset
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4 comments:
Good to see you writing a Haiku :) nice ones dear...!! Its been a long time that I visited your place...!! so many memories here....specially tales of your beloved cats :)
PJ...one small information...one of the basic rules of haikus is that it should be about nature...so atleast a word related to mother nature will make a three liner into a haiku :)
just wanted to share..!!
Thanks for dropping by dear. Welcome back. About the nature rule in haiku i had read abt it in wiki. Just wanted to do something different 😜
Thanks..
this one is beautiful!! anti theft alarm and the heavy meal speaks a lot!!! great going!!! looking forward for more :)
@ Anjali
Hey thanks. Am glad you liked them.
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