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Wednesday, 1 June 2011

The Dilemma!

There is a dilemma about you...
I come closer I wonder if you are the one...
I move a bit away I wonder why you are in my thoughts...
I try to come closer again...
No no... " it has to be with violins playing in the vicinity. It has to be honest. It has to be truthful. It has to be pure ".
I move away...
And I dream of you...

I pray...
Yet from some where you seep in...
I stop. And I never ever give in again.
My soul weeps.
I don't, even on the pew.
And so there is a dilemma about you.

15 comments:

Suresh Kumar said...

I am in dilemma as to what to comment..

Agar yeh direct dil se hain tho, confidence se move rakho yaar....:)

Amity said...

nice thoughts Priya...

heyyyyy I missed yah!

stopped blogging for a very long while....but I am back, yet on a new platform - wordpress...some probs with my original blog... :)

please care to drop by my new blog...:)

http://intelclub.wordpress.com/

missed you sweetie

love,

amity

KKG said...

nice one pj
You are one awesome writer!!
:)

Tara said...

Haha!! I so understand this, almost seems like it's written for me! You know why. :) Can so relate to it, super! :)

deeps said...

hmmm
when we got to journey through life alone... it happens re... life is like that :)
but then...

RiĆ  said...

So good to see u back. :)

Stupidosaur said...

Touching piece!

One doubt: If violins are playing, it is honest????

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ suresh:
hehe bt most of the times that only is the dilemma .. :P

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ amity:
awwwww!!
thank ya :))

and welcome back after a long tym :D
I'll be bak to ur blog vy soon :))
just a li'l busy these dys so not bloghopping much :(

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ kkg:

thnx a lot dear :))

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ tara:
:D:D I guess ths is wth many ppl
age is the culprit :D

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ deeps:

well it's the confusion..that just makes ppl not commit into anythng...not that they like to journey through life alone... :D

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@ ria:

will disappear agn :D

Priyadarshini Joyce said...

@Stupidosaur:
welcome here :D
n thank ya :))

well violins and honesty are differently listed so they can't mean the same..
violins mean it's gotta be truly beautifully insane ;)
and honest means it has to be worth it..mutual..no hook up...pure commitment..

N J said...

Very well written!