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Saturday, 31 July 2010

I know you feel me...


I know I held your hand in the rain...
I know I kissed your forehead while you were asleep...
I knew you were mine...

I knew...I was yours...




I know I puked blood...

I know you look up to the skies....
I know you feel me....

16 comments:

Suresh Kumar said...

The unanswered question is who is this YOU?

Suresh Kumar said...

The unanswered question is who is this YOU?

Priya Joyce said...

@ suresh:

it's pure fiction :)
it cud be nyone so

deeps said...

maybe that s the differnce between wat we feel, wat we know and the reailty as it is out there....

Mayz said...

scary!

Gaurav Kant Goel said...

:) Wow....

nands said...

That was compact 'fiction story'. :D
Somethings don't die! :)

nikita said...

it was truly beautiful...

ANWESA said...

Sad...somehow I felt like you have started a new kind of writing. Reminds me of my "You and I" series.

Maverick said...

every line hits da mark...nd so beautifully...da right mix of emotions...love, shock, loss and den love again!

luvd it needless to say! :)

prajyot said...

Rain and Feelings, are so much go hand-in hand....

Well expressed feelings..

Pooja said...

So nicely written!

vishesh said...

:)

Mel Avila Alarilla said...

You must be in love to be able to come up with so much love poems. Well that's just normal for a girl your age. Just don't get too serious until you reach that age where you are already very sure of yourself and your feelings. Thanks for the love post. God bless you always.

Prathima Bhat said...

Mixed emotions.... :) :(

Anonymous said...

scary for sure!!