It all started one naughty day between two complete perverts...
he: so whazz the color?
she: lavender..
he: That's wild..
she: yeah ;)
What followed was the endless wild talk...daily at any moment of the day till the wee hours....sleepless were they but desperate was their soul..hungry for pleasure and more and more...
nights were no less than an adventure....
sure she was...that love..romance ..and mystery were words that could never come between them....
Lust is not Love....
Uncertain is life...they say....and it was...
she: i miss you...
he...I miss you too...
A level up towards love....crudely human past..now was finely angelic ...
he was a die hard romantic...most romantic she'd met......
his embrace was the warmest...the kiss on her forehead was the sweetest ever.....
it was the other side...the soft side...the better side...
the "devil" of her wild fantasies possessed innocence.
every word he said would echo in her mind for hours...
Lasting was the effect...
Lost and absent minded...
vicinities...never existed ...
all was him...dreams were her reality...
The sleepless nights still existed..
serene n soft...the two were lost in each others' warmth...
essence of LOVE...
Mysteriously connected were they...
She wore a wide smile now....positive was her every vibe...
he was her every moment...
he was smiling too...
lost too...
and one day....
he: i love you..
she I love you too ..love you lots...
The smile is now for an eternity...
Love too...
Love that is not jealous...
love that is not about possession ...
love that is just happiness..
love that is just about being lost...
Love exists amidst the deepest...darkest ..and the dirtiest secrets they shared....
A story has been created...
never would they walk by each other in reality..
but dreams are their reality....
28 comments:
ohh me can also drop in first here?? great...
well, vere pani oonnum ellathe sitting and its after effect alle?
:-P
ennalum vere aara colorokke asking? umm
by the way, thats nt you, but a rajstani PJ who started it all ... stupid
dreams were their reality?? hmmm...
how i wish it would be true the other way around---if reality was (as beautiful) as a dream! :)
but then if wishes were horses...sigh!
eh waz lavender??? ok ok...hehehehe
i must say this a rather interestin piece...more so coz of d development of 2 perverts as u put it
i loved when u called love happiness...thats all that it shud b abt too :)
Liked the last line.
Very poetic indeed... a surprise package from PJ... may be the rain effect.... :)
Now, I am done with the post I missed in your blog...:)
Losing senses is missing out on others' post, lols...:)
Too entertaining a story you created here...:)
Have a nice day dear...:))
interesting hai..
u r inspiring me to write....
..hmmm nice..
A wonderful love story woven in poetic form. It speaks of the musings of two souls yearning for meaning and expression. Thanks for the post. God bless you always.
Hmmm :) Is it Monsoon effect??
Y ppl r so scared to make it reality?
it was nice Priya...der love is full of feelings :)
@ deeps:
yeahh I guess after ages :P
yeahh vere pani onnum illa ;)
hahaha fiction da :P chill
yehh yehh...perhaps tat rajasthani pj is still in rajasthan :)
@ pri:
dreams are as beautiful...
u never know cuz people do search for shade when they get the sunrise they longed for...
@ mayz:
confidential :P
Love sure is abt happiness...eternal bliss!
thankiyuu :)
@ anwesa:
even I loved it when i composed it :P
@ suresh:
rain has irritated me :P so it's some other effect :P
@ amity:
nw that's a compliment disguised in emotions :P
thanks dear :)
@ kul sir:
aww thnx :)
then do write :))
@ vidisha:
thnx dear :)
@ Mel:
thnx :)
yeah exactly it sure is like that :)
@ devil I:
May be because dreams can be more beautiful than realities...
or may be bcos...
(chk for my rep to pri)
@ Riya:
yeahh very expressive n emotional :)
thnx dear :)
1st time here...saw your profile as in da mutual friend list of a number of fellow bloggers on WL....recommended ur blog....nd I must say its wonderful and thoroughly impressive. Loved the way this one was crafted. Beautifully done! :)
Glad I read this post just when I'm learning the meaning of LOVE :P <3
Lovely post ! Keep writin ! :D
Nice!!
Lavender LOL!!!!
I've been through these all night all day long chats.. now I wonder how did it even happen..exactly like a dream like you say it is...
True, as you say.. love existed between the little things they shared..
You've potrayed love wonderfully. Can't believe it's coming from a 19 year old! Keep it up Soldier.. :)
@ Maverick:
heyy thanx a lot man :)
keep coming :)
@ esthu:
hehe thnx gal :)
well seems like u r not only learning u r falling in love too :P
welcome here :D
@ Enduring Spirit:
hehe ;)
well it just happens..people get in the habit of other people...and they find themselves in Love.
yehpp...love existed amidst the not so gr8 thngs tey did in the past!
:)
thnx buddy :)
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