In love...
deeply...madly...
happy...
secure...
in his arms...
Lost....
spring became autumn...
she smiled....
somewhere ...her smile like leaves fell off!
she lost love...
lost him...
she cried...
she slept in tears...
Many came ...
many yelled..
"I Love you"
she yelled back...
"I've lost my receptors to love"
More than hurt ....numb was she...
the invisible shield ...
never let her be lost in love again...
Being hurt once makes you so wise that yes may be you never get hurt again....but then you never love again so deeply so madly so happily...
Did she?
To be continued....
concluding part here
26 comments:
The first step for being Wise is realizing how Stupid You are...
But that doesn't necessarily mean cheating oneself of love...
Wow....pity she.....But I think after you stumble and fall in love...you should go with more confidence...you can handle which you havent been able to do before...you can deal all the emotional sentiments...judge them if that is true or fake...you can examine the strength of the bond...but if you just hide your self in dark corner and try to show others as an over protective so you are just another fearful guy/gal who nver know how to learn from the pit where he/she have fallen before...To fall in love doesnt means fall by emotions and internal strength and the most important internal you..actually its an uprising...Arises you more than anything....
Hope you read positive in next chapters....
She'll...coz no one can resist love..may be late but never never.
i hope she did
Nice Blog...
D poem is mind blowing..
.... have their own impact on it.beautifully carved out.
beautifully etched out...the words somehow seem to hang on....haunting...adds ounces of essence to the theme...loved this one! :)
tc!
beautifully written Priya...hmmm it is hard to come out from those fears of being hurt...m waiting to read wt she did.. :)
@ suresh:
yeahh true...bt somewhere deep dwn we become unconsciously numb!
unable to fall in so deeply all ovr agn
@ neer:
That's wat I am saying buddy...
we become better n better..we play ....but the madness the feeling of being lost does that come all over again as the first love?
being perfect is not being happy...somehw...
@ anwesa:
well lets see :P
@ mayz:
Lets see...
@ Nikita:
thnx dear :))
@ Maverick:
thnx a lot :))
@ riya:
yehsss...and sometimes we're so unconscious ...so unable to know why we're not able to give in all ovr again ...
i wish there was Like button to the post.. SO here it is Likes
Very nice PJ.
Very well put. I cld totally go through it and feel. :)
Been blog hopping after a really long time... Enjoying it. :)
Soon with the next part pls. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
This is a beautiful love poem reminiscent of the great poems of my good friend- Sameera. You express the same heartfelt and soul inspiring sentiments in your poem. I really miss my friend Sameera. I hope she will resurrect again in the blog world. Thanks for the exquisite love poem. God bless you always my young friend.
Beautiful verse Priya.
Love happens once after that it's Life.
ennado?
Hi Priya..
@Being hurt once makes you so wise that yes may be you never get hurt again....but then you never love again so deeply so madly so happily...
so wise and practical too..
Awaiting the next part..wish she had him happily...!!
@ Nidz:
thankiyuu dear :)
@ arjun:
thanx buddy :))
hehe sure soon :)
@ Mel:
awwwwww I dun think I can be compared to her...she's such a luvly poet :)
I miss her posts too :(
thnx for the lovely comment :)
@ tulika:
Thnx dear :)
well lets see wer my verses lead to...
u nevr know :)
@ deeps:
Lol nw wats tat quest da? :P
@ prams:
yeahh it happens...
thnx for the sweet comment dear :)
well yeah sure soon :)
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