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Friday 29 October 2010

silsilon ka afsana banaa jaoge...

Holding onto your hands in fear  is consolation..
Thinking of you in solitude is pleasure...
watching you watching me ....bliss...

Seeing you in tears in heart piercing...
I disguise....
but I cry...



The you; in you I admire...
The you in me I love...






yea jo dor si bandhi hui hei humare tumhare beech
na jane kab toot jaaye..
yea jo tumhe na paakar bhi paaya hei...
ab gham nahi hota
ke kho denge tumhe hum...
jaante hein, zindagi khoobsurat banaa jaoge...
silsilon ka afsana banaa jaoge...

21 comments:

Shriti said...

awesome ^_^

Siddhesh Kabe said...

Thats lovely pri...just a suggestion background of post change karo ya...padhna muskil hota hai..

KParthasarathi said...

I loved the play of words.Superb

Yamini Meduri said...

helo PJ...hows u???

nice write up...but one suggestion..i think the font color should be changed according to the backgroud..its lighter..!!

but i loved the way u have written this...!!!

nands said...

"watching you watching me"..truely! :))

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

Beautiful.. simply loved those lines...

Rià said...

Wow beautifully written!

Lucifer said...

awesomeness!!!

Suresh Kumar said...

Nice one... Liked the lines "ab gham nahi hota ke kho denge tumhe hum..." very much

Priya Joyce said...

@ Shriti:

welcomee here :D
thnkuuss :)

Priya Joyce said...

@ sid:
thankiyuuusss :))

changed :D

Priya Joyce said...

@ Kp sir:

thankiyuu :))

Priya Joyce said...

@ yamini:
thnx :))
fyn re :)
hw's everythng at ur side?

yeahh i changed it :P

Priya Joyce said...

@nands:

truely? :P

Priya Joyce said...

@ devil:

thnx dear :)

hw's ya?

Priya Joyce said...

@ ria:

thnkyuu dear :)

Priya Joyce said...

@ mayz:

thankiyuuuss :))

Priya Joyce said...

@ suresh:

thankiyuuss :))

Preeti said...

Been long since I dropped by. Am seeing the growth in you. Lovely piece.

deeps said...

ummm
i thought now it s time i stopped here...
never miss that 'you' gurl :P

HootieBird said...

oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,

the days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .

I am scared

I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .

maybe I've loss

A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be

You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk

two fools ,with a smile
Let go

rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "

wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You

My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave

was no one that was there to Listen

Was always there ,to fix me

Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth

there was many that was there to Judge

As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing

as must seemed things I done ,was heartless

dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew

Pray ,
You hear my Heart
Hear my Prayer
washed with tears
take me with you